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I want to be a writer, what do you think? PS: I'm 13?

Rama cold hands grabbed me so hard that sent waves of fear down my spine. It is the hand not loosen, but it's grip became even stronger. The pain in my left arm had become unbearable, I began to feel the sweat running down my arm, or I felt was the sweat? The light pole that stood by had not enough light to see what was behind me, just enough to see what was before me. I was horrified when I saw my left arm. Not only was blood dripping from my shoulder to the tip of my index finger, but also had purple spots and patches up and down the same arm. At the time this was felt as happened in hours or even days. But it was only a seconds. The hand let go I turned quickly to see what or who had grabbed me, but nobody was there. only was I who was at the corner of Peach and Dry Creek Road.

Yay! I found this question again (I said that about 5 minutes just so the screen is saying what deleted-_-) In any case – honestly, it sounds very strange and I like the detail that goes. … However (and this is only my opinion) I think you should change only a couple of things … For example: "It's hand but not loosen grip even more." This sentence is redundant and sounds weird. If I had to change it, would sound like this, "The more I tried to loosen the hand, the stronger the bond is converted." or "hand-tight, crushing my ____" (whatever hand it in – the chest, neck, arms, etc) "I began to feel the sweat running down my arm, or I felt was the sweat?" Huh? This sentence leaves me with O_o look it sounds clumsy. Later, the reader finds that it was blood, so you might say, "I felt something running down my arm. I said I was sweating, trying hard not to believe it could be something else. "but also had purple spots and patches" Personally, I think it could get the word "bubble". To me it sounds rather childish, and not a word I would describe spots in the arms to be. It would sound better if they just said dark purple spots. You're very good at writing, especially for someone who is only 13 years old. I commend you for this ad. I think we will very good writer someday. I hope that did not sound like criticism, but there are always improvements to be made ^ _ ^

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